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I just read one of your comments on perfectdark4242's poem and you were talking about rhyme structure and how it shouldn't control the poem. Well, i though you might want to if you had the time, check out poetry by Philip Larkin. In terms of rhyme, he is one of the most accomplished poets, particularly in the way the rhymes are almost invisible.

Also, would i be wrong to assume you're a killfrog fan?

Thanks for your comment- very helpful. I hadn't even noticed my word repetition. That seems to be something I do often without noticing... so yeah, thanks!

Amy

::cough::
and thank you for the watch/friend thing

^____^

it seems you're kinda new to dA .. but even if you're not it seems noone's given you the proper welcome.

WELCOME TO DEVIANTART or something!!! lol

i'm having trouble critiquing your poems for one reason-
i took into deep consideration that you're trying different styles (which is what I'm trying to do due to that 30-day poetry challenge thing). i don't really see anything beyond being nit-picky and pointing out slight grammatical errors...

if you want i'll try again some other time looking at each poem individually one by one, not as a mismatched collage (stupid mental blocks of mine >_< ).

and again, thanks for your comment ^^

Hey, thankyou very much for the dev watch! It does really mean a lot

Dreams~

hello,

i see you watching ~poetic-forms.. thanks for the watch.. i'm not too sure if you are a member, but if you wish to be, do send us a note ith "Join" in the subject line yeah ??

see you around ~~~

~chiroptera
on behalf of ~poetic-forms